1. i was taken into this piece and taveled to different places. i actually felt myself travel around the world and back to looking to God. good post.

    just check the typo on the fourth from last line. it…is.

  2. Guttural and gut-real beauty, all wrapped into one. Does that make sense only to me? RissaRoo, these are my favorite lines…

    a sister bends inside
    with the weight of poison secrets


    a baby’s first laughter
    ripples through the room


    and somehow when
    time folds in we will see

  3. just peeking through your words this morning,
    This is a beautiful poem.
    Writing is a gift that is worth sharing, and worth feeding your own soul in the call to be who you are.
    You will find the balance in circles of up and down, as life , and your loved ones will understand your respect for them, and yourself , as we are all children still..
    does that make sense?

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